The Untitled Poem
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The Untitled Poem
Neutrals Wed Aug 13, 2008 4:59 pm
In darkness….
In darkness I wait
Forever for someone who cares.
My world seems only
Drowning in hate;
Where is my someone who cares?
Alone in the corner of the dusty old room,
The lights dimmed; the windows nailed shut.
In solitude
In tears
In love and in prayer
I wait for my hero to come.
Neither in sleep nor work nor leisure
Do I find relief from this pain.
The night’s a reminder of the day yet to be,
An omen of suffering shame.
Why?
Why is it me?
Why must my heart live distressed?
Who will notice the girl with the eyes
Of sorrow and anguished unrest?
In darkness I wait
Forever for someone who cares.
My world seems only
Drowning in hate;
Where is my someone who cares?
Alone in the corner of the dusty old room,
The lights dimmed; the windows nailed shut.
In solitude
In tears
In love and in prayer
I wait for my hero to come.
Neither in sleep nor work nor leisure
Do I find relief from this pain.
The night’s a reminder of the day yet to be,
An omen of suffering shame.
Why?
Why is it me?
Why must my heart live distressed?
Who will notice the girl with the eyes
Of sorrow and anguished unrest?
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Re: The Untitled Poem
OneNerveAtATime Wed Aug 13, 2008 5:01 pm
Oh. My. Gosh. 
It's so SAD and SORROWFUL.
It's so SAD and SORROWFUL.
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Re: The Untitled Poem
Neutrals Wed Aug 13, 2008 5:02 pm
But that's the only one I kept. The other ones were crap.
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Re: The Untitled Poem
OneNerveAtATime Wed Aug 13, 2008 5:05 pm
I'm sure you just think that they were crap, but really, they were actually good.
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Re: The Untitled Poem
Neutrals Wed Aug 13, 2008 5:07 pm
Thanks. I wrote it when I was an emo person a few months back.
And no, they were not good at all. Nothing like you guys' poems! You're amazing!
And no, they were not good at all. Nothing like you guys' poems! You're amazing!
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Re: The Untitled Poem
CHIPSAHOYS Thu Aug 14, 2008 2:33 pm
*sighs with Jeny*
Jenni, we have to name it, it feels unloved. It told me so.
Jenni, we have to name it, it feels unloved. It told me so.
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