Hopeless Star
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Hopeless Star
OneNerveAtATime Mon Aug 11, 2008 3:18 pm
Wishing on a star,
hoping for a dream come true.
Searching wide and far,
watching for a glimpse of you.
Hello, little light.
You glow in my sky.
You brighten my night.
May I ask why?
Why do you answer so few?
I waited so long for you.
I guess I'll go back,
go back a versus or two.
I wished on a star,
hoped for a dream come true.
I searched wide and far,
but never saw a glimpse of you.
hoping for a dream come true.
Searching wide and far,
watching for a glimpse of you.
Hello, little light.
You glow in my sky.
You brighten my night.
May I ask why?
Why do you answer so few?
I waited so long for you.
I guess I'll go back,
go back a versus or two.
I wished on a star,
hoped for a dream come true.
I searched wide and far,
but never saw a glimpse of you.
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Re: Hopeless Star
CHIPSAHOYS Mon Aug 11, 2008 3:31 pm
YEAH! I TOTALLY LOVE IT! I mean, yours RYTHMES! Mine never rythme...Pfft.
I LOVE "I guess I'll go back, go back a versus or two." part.
I LOVE "I guess I'll go back, go back a versus or two." part.
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Re: Hopeless Star
Neutrals Wed Aug 13, 2008 4:19 pm
You're poems are always amazing, J. (Well, I've read this one on Gaia before....) You've really got a talent for poetry. You too Erica! I'm proud of you guys! I can't write poetry for my life....
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Re: Hopeless Star
CHIPSAHOYS Wed Aug 13, 2008 4:51 pm
JENNI! GOD! You can WRITE! Your good. Your amazingly good.
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Re: Hopeless Star
Neutrals Wed Aug 13, 2008 4:52 pm
CHIPSAHOYS wrote:JENNI! GOD! You can WRITE! Your good. Your amazingly good.
No... not in poetry. I only have one poem that I actually kept on my computer.
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Re: Hopeless Star
OneNerveAtATime Wed Aug 13, 2008 4:53 pm
Jenni, you are good. It doesn't matter how much you write but the quality of your writing.
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Re: Hopeless Star
Neutrals Wed Aug 13, 2008 4:55 pm
I can write normally, dudes!! Just not poems. They just come out CRAP. If you want me to, I can post that one I kept...
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Re: Hopeless Star
CHIPSAHOYS Wed Aug 13, 2008 5:04 pm
Yes. It was like a weird post though. And I'm spontaniously combusting from typing so fast.
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Re: Hopeless Star
Neutrals Wed Aug 13, 2008 5:05 pm
I can't keep up with you guys! I'm trying to read and respond as best I can but you post so quickly!
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